tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post7328611438924315798..comments2023-12-26T08:04:26.814-05:00Comments on Groovy's Ruminations: With a Little Help From My Friends or, In This Case, Friendgroovyoldladyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07971936982658984234noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-40902722408998966422022-01-18T03:06:30.835-05:002022-01-18T03:06:30.835-05:00Grateful for sharing this post. Grateful for sharing this post. Nicola Chttps://www.nicolacox.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-20622838868447915662009-08-09T12:21:33.906-04:002009-08-09T12:21:33.906-04:00Thank you for sharing your story! And thank you fo...Thank you for sharing your story! And thank you for allowing me to share mine. Good luck! Is this your first 24 hour contest. It is my second but I did not make the deadline for the first. This one I wrote in about thrity minutes! First contest I was trying to write the full 24 hours...writercorinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05160563724697141010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-84412696325414146592009-08-09T12:10:26.962-04:002009-08-09T12:10:26.962-04:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.writercorinnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05160563724697141010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-43418485746671382832009-07-27T10:13:14.281-04:002009-07-27T10:13:14.281-04:00Bear...I like your version best. It is short and g...Bear...I like your version best. It is short and get's right to the heart of the matter without alot of unecessary drama. Thank you for your thoughtful input.groovyoldladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07971936982658984234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-3301970887518720612009-07-25T02:50:42.091-04:002009-07-25T02:50:42.091-04:00Good Luck Groovy! They look good. I love the 24 ho...Good Luck Groovy! They look good. I love the 24 hour contest but haven't entered for awhile. Eventhough I never win I always have a good story to send out. Two of my losing stories have gone on to be published. So if you don't make it through, you should send yours out.Laurihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11112458658109887868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-78338854948163414152009-07-25T00:09:54.138-04:002009-07-25T00:09:54.138-04:00What a fun exercise! I do think the second version...What a fun exercise! I do think the second version is better -- more action? better description? -- but I enjoyed reading the first version too.Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03724228599717695914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-47327169767803992302009-07-24T22:04:46.902-04:002009-07-24T22:04:46.902-04:00Here's my effort...
The girl was licking the ...Here's my effort...<br /><br />The girl was licking the cotton candy crystals from her fingertips when she felt the first raindrops. She joined the other visitors in racing for shelter as the drops turned into a summer afternoon torrent. She ducked into the nearest red-and-white striped tent, almost running into a woman with caked make-up and large rings on every finger. As the girl started to offer an apologetic smile, the woman looked up. Her wrinkled face registered instant recognition and she screamed, "It's you!" The girl looked up with recognition in here eyes, "Yes, Grandma Price, it is."<br /><br />What do you think...? Now be honest, I can take it.Bearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13515557547372274960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-6745397602360983202009-07-24T17:43:04.274-04:002009-07-24T17:43:04.274-04:00Anno, I count that as high praise coming from you....Anno, I count that as high praise coming from you. Thank You!!groovyoldladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07971936982658984234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34850610.post-66726023726231563932009-07-24T15:18:08.200-04:002009-07-24T15:18:08.200-04:00Groovy, this is fabulous -- both versions! I'm...Groovy, this is fabulous -- both versions! I'm glad to see you taking up the challenge, happier yet to see the results. Sure like Darla, and I think you've got Gramma Price perfectly captured; I think I've known one or two like her in my time.annohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05102616203481686227noreply@blogger.com